Author Archives: Bob Evans

The Deep Background of Vulcan’s Forge

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My SF/Noir novel Vulcan’s Forge, published March 2020 by Flametree Press, is set on the distant

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and isolated human colony of Nocturnia, but the events of the story takes place centuries and centuries after the destruction of the Earth.

In the early 22nd century, after fusion power plants had become common, Artificial intelligences practical, and humanity has settlements, some quite large, throughout the inner solar system, a rouge brown dwarf is discovered with an orbit that will take through the solar system, disrupting and destroying the rocky inner planets.

Face with extinction humanity designs, constructs, and launches hundreds of automated solar sail arks. These arks do not carry crew or people but rather the egg and sperm of animals and people along with sophisticated A.I.s and the equipment to construct human colonies. Once an ark has reached its target system, should it have survived the centuries long voyage still functional, and provided there is a planet suitable for terrestrial life, the A.I. build the colony and its required infrastructure, and then utilizing artificial wombs, birth the first generation of human born on alien worlds, preserving humanity and numerous other Earth species.

Surprisingly cheap, due to plentiful fusion power, the resources of the solar system, and artificial intelligence each ark cost in today’s dollars about half a billion to build, equip, and launch. With the arks so affordable they are not the sole domain of governments and numerous cultures, religions, sub-cultures, and even a few individuals commission arks in a bid to save and ensure to continuity of their ways of life. There is even a couple of arks dedicated to making sure that out there among the star Texas continues to survive and thrive.

The colony of Nocturnia was settled by an ark commission by a group who fetishized Urban Americana of the 1950s. Believing that mid-twentieth century America represented some sort of ideal culture they programed the A.I.s of the ark to disseminate this as the colony’s sole culture. Naturally their ideas of what comprised an ‘ideal’ culture from one which more than a century and a half separated them were based more of myth and misunderstanding.

The novel picks up on Nocturnia as the third generation has come into its own and Jason Kessler, a man ill-suited to the social conformity of the 50s discovers that the colony harbors a deep and deadly secret.

As a traditionally published novel Vulcan’s Forge can be ordered from wherever books are sold. I am including links to San Diego premier specialty bookstore Mysterious Galaxy along with links to Amazon.

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Silo: Season One, Final Thoughts

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Here’s my thoughts on Silo in a single sentence; I will not be back for season two.

I will go into more detailed thoughts about this series, but it will be spoiler filled, so if all you want to know is if I liked or not, I direct you back to the opening sentence.

Silo is centered on Jules Nichols (Rebecca Fergusson) as she uncovers a vast and hidden conspiracy within the close-ecology world of ‘the silo’ where some 10,000 people live hundreds of years following a global undefined ecological catastrophe. The outside world, viewed only through wall sized screen is devoid of life. Individuals exiled from the silo, though given precious resources in the form of a sealed contamination suit, die within a few dozen meters. Investigating the murder of her lover Jules discovers hints and elements of the secret powers that controls and monitors every aspect of the Silo’s life and in the end is exiled. But because her friends make sure she has working sealant tape on her contamination suit she doesn’t die and discovers amid the devastated world dozens of ‘silos’ dotting the landscape.

Stories and settings like Silo require a solid foundation of world building so everything that follows is credible. Once the world building cracks the suspension of disbelief is shattered and everything else unravels. Illogical element after illogical element are compounded throughout the season that reveal shoddy and ill-thought-out world building. The Silo has only one generator to power the vast structure and it is never taken offline for maintenance. Imagine starting your car and running it for years, decades, only added gasoline as needed. It won’t work, that can’t happen. People eat bacon and eggs in a setting where the only rational choice is vegetarianism. With such tight, limited space and resources, it makes no sense and would not be sustainable to grow calories to feed to animals so you can get fewer calories. For a place that has been utterly isolated and with such shoddy recycling as what is shown the silo is amazingly well stocked with new, clean, and pristine plastics. Nothing about how this environment is set up actually works if you give it a moment’s thought.

Even if you wave away all the illogical and irrational world building, Silo is still in my tastes fatally flawed within its own rule set.

At one point late in the season Jules is escaping the dreaded ‘judicial’, the people behind the conspiracy, and is forced to climb between levels in a garbage chute. It is stated in the dialog that she disappeared on ‘level 20’ and she and her compatriots emerge on ‘level 122’. One hundred levels climbing a vertical ladder. If a level is just 8 feet, and they look much taller than that in the sets, they just climbed 800 feet! Yet they emerge not exhausted, tired, cramped, or even sweaty. The writers simply are not thinking at all about what they have just put onto the page.

As part of the conspiracy, we seen the surveillance room where a staff of seven or eight watch many monitors visually scanning the entire silo. Let’s say its seven people, three eight-hour shifts, that 21 people. Add in another shift so you can rotate days off and we have 28 people. However, you need people who aren’t watching to maintain the equipment, so let’s say they brings you up to 35 or 40 people. But you need still more people in this conspiracy. All that equipment draws power from the electric grid, and someone would notice that the ‘janitor’s closet’ is using kilowatts upon kilowatts of juice. So, you have to have people in engineering who are covering up all that missing electricity. A conspiracy so vast simply cannot go on unknown. People talk, it’s a fact of human existence.

Silo excepts too much to be simply waved away for what at its heart is not that compelling of a story nor that interesting collection of characters.

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Productive Again

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I was quite fearful that this damned flu was going to derail my work-in-progress novel. Knocked out of commission for nearly two weeks as I hacked and wheezed and barely maintained any coherent thought my book languished without any active editing or composing.

Normally if something derails my writing and editing after the interruption, I return to work by re-reading the outline. This returns me to the mindset of the novel, puts the characters back into my head, primes the pump for more creativity. Writing this beast without an outline meant I couldn’t do that this time.

Instead of an outline I re-read the chapter that was in progress and either by luck or due to a story that was still going strong in my subconscious I fell right back into the world or Wallace Point and it’s terrifying secret. (Well, at least I hope it’s terrifying. That’s for the readers to determine.)

I know that I have fully gotten back into the flow of the novel because for the last couple of nights as I lay in bed waiting for blissful sleep to arrive my brain has exploded with solutions to vexing plot problems.

The evening have also seen the return of my editing as I have now edited the first five chapters of the work and been pleasantly surprised that this rudderless approach hasn’t yielded a meandering aimless story.

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In The Arcade Of Life, You Get One Quarter

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A few years ago, an analogy became popular that cis white men were playing the video game of life on ‘easy’ mode and anyone else played at increasing levels of difficulty. A decent analogy but not the one I am going to deploy today.

Life is like a well-stocked arcade with lots and lots of game cabinets for us to enjoy but we have only the one quarter. Death has surrounded me my entire life and if there is one thing that has been beaten into me it is that death comes for us all and none knows when that final moment will be upon us.

Now, you might think that the message I am going for in this piece is ‘seize the day,’ ‘live life to the fullest,’ or ‘follow you dreams,’ all good message but not the one I intend today.

No, today I say:

STOP FUCKING WITH OTHER PEOPLE’S GAMES!

I do not know what it is like to live my life as Trans, gay, bi-sexual, poly, non-white, or any other of the near infinite varieties of human but I do know that like me, like everyone else, they get only one life. They are here only once and death stalks them with the same lack of remorse as it does me. I don’t care what it takes for them to live their single life fully and truthfully. As long as they are hurting no one else, it’s not my fucking business. And it’s no one else’s either!

I have no patience for those who think that their way of life is something to impose upon others. Life is hard and far too short. I have no interest in making it harder for anyone else, particularly for such petty reasons.

Every resource can be recycled, reclaimed, or replaced except time. So to those who aren’t going to listen to me anyone, stop fucking with their games and let them live their truthful lives.

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A Quick Update

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This blog has been quiescent for several days because this author has been battling the worst flu/cold he has suffered in something like 15 years.

Thursday July 6th symptoms began with a nasty cough that made it seem like tiny workmen with sandpaper were busily resurfacing by brachia. I managed to get to my day job on the 7th and after that I was down and out.

Last week was a terrible collage of coughing, hacking, and sweating. I managed to return to work on Friday and even this weekend had far more coughing than I would have cared for.

Now that the worst is behind me, I hope to return to work on my novel and perhaps even make it out to a film.

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Movie Review: Indiana Jones and the Dial of Destiny

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It is a truth universally acknowledged that Raiders of the Lost Ark remains the best film in the Indiana Jones Franchise. The order of the following four movies in the series then depends upon personal taste. I would list the second-best entry as being The Last Crusade and third best would go to James Mangold’s Dial of Destiny.

After an extended sequence set near the end of the Second World War, with digital ‘de-aging’ to present Dr. Jones (Harrison Ford) as he might have appeared in that period and establishing some critical characters and events, Dial of Destiny is set in 1969, with a world that looks to futures in space rather than antiquity and Dr. Jones retiring from academia. Jones is no longer the man he once was, in addition to living alone in a dingy second-rate apartment, his once infectious charm has vanished, and he is unable to inspire even his student bored and listless in his class.

When his goddaughter Helena (Phoebe Waller-Bridge) arrives looking for information on a device that Jones and her father discovered in loot stolen by then Nazis, a globe spanning adventure begins as the pair are pursued by CIA agents, murderous thugs, organized criminals, and Nazi scientists bitter over the war’s outcome. The fate of the world will once again be determined by Indiana Jones and his ingenuity.

Director James Mangold (Logan, Ford v Ferrari) does a perfectly serviceable job helming this adventure. The film’s most serious weakness in my opinion is that some of the chase/action sequences are too lengthy. The character work is on point and there isn’t a scene with Phoebe Waller-Bridge that I did not find delightful. Mad Mikkelsen, as always, delivers a credible and threatening villain. There are enough call backs in the film to be fun without feeling that it lived only for ‘fan service.’

Dial of Destiny is ahead of the thematic breaking Crystal Skull and the continuity breaking Temple of Doom, (Isn’t it amazing that Dr Jones doesn’t believe in that hocus pocus stuff after his encounter in India?) but doesn’t quite have the personal character growth and arc of either Last Crusade or Raiders.

Indiana Jones and the Dial of Destiny is playing in theaters.

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Movie Review: Asteroid City

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I do not have a deep history with Wes Anderson having seen only two of his films before yesterday’s screening of Asteroid City. (The two films being Rushmore which did not emotionally connect with me in any manner, and The Grand Budapest Hotel, which I thoroughly enjoyed.)

Asteroid City is more like The Grand Budapest Hotel in tone and visual style than Rushmoreand as such I was happy to roll the dice and see this in the theater with my sweetie-wife.

The film is structed as a story within a story with the framing narrative a television broadcast,

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presented in black & white and in television’s aspect ratio, about the writing and performance of the play Asteroid City, which deals with a collection of disparate and quirky characters that fate has brought together in the titular town and is the interior narrative of the structure.

The film struck me as more of an expression of tone than rather a more traditional narrative exercise. While there are character arcs and plot obstacles in both the frame and the interior stories, neither are presented as the principal reason for experiencing this production. Rather it is the emotional reaction that is the driving force of the script. Anderson frames, films, and directs the performances of his immensely talented cast in a manner that creates an unreal artificiality, informing the audience that while the events are heightened abstract versions of plot elements but leaving the emotional resonances untouched.

Asteroid City is not a film for everyone. It’s highly stylized production and performance will be distancing to some but charming and engaging to others. However if The Grand Budapest Hotel, which utilized very similar devices, worked for you than it is likely your will find your time stranded in Asteroid City equally enjoyable.

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Bits and Pieces

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Here are my thoughts on a few scattered subjects.

The Titan Tragedy

The loss of the vessel with the five people aboard was a tragedy. Albeit an avoidable tragedy and one that is wholly unsurprising given the history of the company and its attitude towards safety. The only grace in the terrible affair is that the people aboard almost certainly had no awareness of their demise. A catastrophic failure of the pressure hull at depth is an event that would be measure in milliseconds involving energies comparable to several sticks of dynamite.

Star Trek: Strange New Worlds Season 2

Quite happy to see this series return. I am an old fart and much of the recent Star Trekofferings have not worked particularly well for me. Granted episode one gave us yet another massive court-martial event that will be swept under the rug further supporting the jest to advance in Star Fleet an officer must at some time commit mutiny, the series remains enjoyed with interesting characters and a fine cast.

Marvel’s Secret Invasion

Off to a good start. Fun paranoia dealing with shape shifters and the eternal question of ‘who can you trust?’ A definite ‘gut punch’ of an ending at the first episode as stakes rose considerably. Of course, it won’t be until the story is concluded that I can render a final judgement. Endings are critical and a bad one can ruin an experience. e.g., Game of Thrones

Adventures in ‘Pantsing’ a novel

My experiment continues along. My first novel length attempt at horror combined with an attempt to craft the novel without an outline has now reached about 25000 words of an expected 80,000 to 100,000 word target. I suspect that the current act, Act 2 of 5, will be the most challenging and if I can get through this bit the rest should fall into place.

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Quatermass The Conclusion (1979)

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Bernard Quatermass the brilliant rocket scientist of Nigel Kneale’s writing embarked on numerous adventures, starting with 1953 The Quatermass Experiment a television serial adapted later into a film The Quatermass Xperiment, through my favorite version Quatermass and the Pit (Released in the USA as 5 Million Years to Earth) and then finally concluding in 1979 with another television series Quatermass also known as Quatermass the Conclusion.

Aired in 1979 Quatermass sees the famed scientist aged, and distraught as he searches for his lost granddaughter, a young woman seemingly taken by the same madness infecting the young adults of the world, as society on both sides of the Iron Curtain crumbles. Set in the waning years of the 20th century, the world of Quatermass is a world of decay, societal, governmental, and institutional. Gang battle in the streets of London without police intervention, mass executions are held in sports stadiums, and the cult like ‘Planet People’ disillusioned youth around the world await the aliens that will take them to another world of peace and love.

When a crowd of ‘Planet People’ are vaporized by an unknown energy from space it is clear that some ancient alien force is at work, an alien force that may have visited the Earth some 5000 years earlier. Working with a radio astronomer and a collection of aged scientists, who by their advanced years are immune to the alien’s call, Quatermass feverishly attempts to discover the truth of the attacks, devise a counter, and find his missing granddaughter.

Quatermass is a dark dystopic tale of a world that has quite possibly crumbled beyond restoration. Where the earlier stories had elements of darkness and ancient powers none presented the nature of humanity, even with Martian heritage, a cynical as this limited series. While Kneale was merely 57 when the series aired it has the feeling of an old man grumbling about the disrespectful youth and that the world he had known has fallen into decadence and filth. No one in this series is protected by ‘plot armor’ and Kneale deals death as indiscriminately as reality sadness does. It is surprising that in a post Star Wars environment the BBC produced something are dire and doom filled as this program. Quatermass might very well be the final gasp of the cynical seventies before the coming of the endless mindless adventure stories of the 80s.

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Zoo Photos Sunday June 18th, 2023

 

Yesterday, being a Sunday without a feature film for me and my sweetie-wife was a day to go to the zoo. I had expected it to be quite busy on account of Father’s Day, but when we arrived at 9:15 am the crowds were quite spare.

The Snow Leopard was posing for the guests, and I am very happy with this photo.

The Grizzly bears had been fed and the cool morning had them unusually active.

Like the Grizzlies, the Mountain Lions were also very active. As we watched them a small side door opened and one mountain lion exited immediately while the other in true cat fashion came to the door and then paused for a lengthy period torn between going through the door or staying put.

We ended our visit with a trip to the burrowing owls, one of my sweetie-wife’s favorite spots.

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