My novel that is, not me. Last night was another meeting of the Mysterious Galaxy Writers’ Group and I read the first half of chapter 3 of Love and Loyalty to the group. I think I can fairly state it was well received with an interesting bit of feedback. There seems to be a consensus that this is really my chapter 1.

I really can’t say that they are wrong either. The precipitating event that drives the entire plot of the novel occurred in the section I read and everyone seemed to pick-up on its importance. I myself knew that the story didn’t really roll until chapter 3, but I had no idea how to fix it. I know I need what’s in Chapters 1 & 2 to set up the characters and some of the troubles that lay ahead for them. Luckily the group had some fine ideas there and I think I see a way forward. It will not mean tearing the novel apart as much as shuffling a few scenes and a bit of minor re-writing. (which I was doing anyway.)