Monthly Archives: March 2011

In a state of flux

My novel that is, not me. Last night was another meeting of the Mysterious Galaxy Writers’ Group and I read the first half of chapter 3 of Love and Loyalty to the group. I think I can fairly state it was well received with an interesting bit of feedback. There seems to be a consensus that this is really my chapter 1.

I really can’t say that they are wrong either. The precipitating event that drives the entire plot of the novel occurred in the section I read and everyone seemed to pick-up on its importance. I myself knew that the story didn’t really roll until chapter 3, but I had no idea how to fix it. I know I need what’s in Chapters 1 & 2 to set up the characters and some of the troubles that lay ahead for them. Luckily the group had some fine ideas there and I think I see a way forward. It will not mean tearing the novel apart as much as shuffling a few scenes and a bit of minor re-writing. (which I was doing anyway.)

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Sunday Night Movie High Noon

I have said before that Westerns, in general, are not my type of film. I know a lot fo people grew up watching endless western movie on televisions, but that was not my childhood film experience. Even from an early age I tended towards science-fiction and horror as my preferred movies.

In my collection of DVDs and Blu-ray I have but three westerns and it is no surprise that they are considered to generally anti-westerns in tone and story.

High Noon is a classic of American Cinema. It is the story of one man, Will Kane, and his dilemma caught between duty, honor, and love. These are timeless themes, expertly handled albeit in a cynical setting and plot.

Five years before the opening of the story the setting, Hadleyville, is a violent dangerous town run by a near psychotic criminal, Frank Miller. As people often says during the film, and ‘You know what kind of man Frank Miller is,” clearly they have read the Dark Knight Returns.

With a small army of experienced gunmen acting as deputies, Marshall Will Kane, Gary Cooper, cleans up the town sending Miller to prison to hang for murder. With the town quite, prosperous and a place with families and children thriving, Kane, ready to give up his violent career and marry his fiancé Amy Fowler, Grace Kelly, a Quaker and a devout pacifist is about to turn storekeeper instead of lawman. Word suddenly arrives that elements of Miller’s old gang are hanging about the train station and are mightily concerned about the arrival of the noon train. Concurrently a telegram arrives, not only had Millers execution been converted to prison time, Miller’s now been pardoned. (Apparently comic book writer make the kind of bucks that can buy pardons.)

Kane feels his duty compels him to stay and deal with Miller wt all, as the new Marshall will not arrive in town until the next day. Nearly everyone in two disagrees. Amy stands by her faith and belief that violence is not an answer and refuses to wait around and find out if she will be wife or widow. Kane’s deputy, Lloyd Bridges, thinks this should be his moment to shine and become marshal, Kane old love, and also an old flame of Millers’ Helen Ramirez, Katy Juardo understands Kane, but burnt as a jilted woman she refuses to render any assistance.

With the clock ticking towards noon, Kane finds fewer and fewer friends at his side. A town cowers as the murderous men approach. High Noon is the story of a man pleading for help and finding no one willing to give any.

High Noon is a very cynical story. At heart people are no damn good and will turn on their friends to save themselves. In part it is an allegory for the Red Scare and witch hunts of the period. The writer had been through the wringer as an unfriendly witness before the HUAC and learned that many of the people whom he had counted on as friends deserted him when times became tough and dangerous. Whether you agree with this assessment of humanity or not the film is near perfect and powerful in the dramatic tension. Filmed with a stark black-and-white palette this is not a lovely western composed of sweeping vistas and awesome nature, but rather this is a setting that is bright, washed out, and dry. Running in nearly real time, the story start 10:30 and ends with the arrival of the noon train, about the same amount of time as it takes to watch, the story piles on tension and reversals with very little action until the final reel.

Even if Westerns are not your cup of teas, or coffee, or vodka, or whatever is in your cup, this is a movie everyone should see at some time.

 

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More no posting posts

Yup as you can see form the headache tagged posts it has been a nasty couple of days for yours truly. I hope to get back to regular posting soon.

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Headache Log

03/29/2011

6:30 awoke with a blinding headache. Normaly lights too intense to bear, even the LCD monitor on my computer was too intense. I took a full does of the Rx, called in sick to work, and returned to bed until 9:30. Vertigo seem fairly bad.

9:30 headache persisted but at a lower level.

11:00 or there abouts the headache intensity lowered to a mild pain and very little vertigo.

By afternoon headache nearly all gone.

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Headache Log

03/28/2011

about 9:30 am began getting a headache with photophobia. I only had a full does of the Rx with me and I took that. Did not seem to affect the headache, by 10:30 I was in severe pain and barely able to function. I took an early lunch about 11:30 and with rest and food the headache abated and I was able to complete my work day, though the headache remained in a mild fashion throughout the day.

 

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Sunday Night Movie posting, postponed

Hello all.

I did watch a Sunday Night Movie last night, but today I suffered a really nasty migraine attack. It started at work, I managed to beat it down with my Rx, but it never fully subsided.

Tomorrow will be better.

 

 

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Headache Log

About 10:00 started getting a headache from loud yelling while shopping at Costco. Came home and took 1/2 a dose of rx. Headache did not develop.

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Tech Blues

I am hoping that I will not have to replace my PS3 system. It has developed a curious fault. It loves to lock-up at the home-screen. It plays games, videos, and Discs just fine, but once you return to the home screen the damned thing loves to lock-up tight.
I have no idea what is causing this.

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