Well After going through the first chapter of Love and Loyalty with the Mysterious Galaxy Writers Group I have decided to do yet another line edit of Love and Loyalty.

I want to work on both books, but a realistic appraisal of my writing time and our resources says that such plans are doomed to failure. Given that I had to select the novel I thought was closer to be a salable manuscript and that is Love and Loyalty. Hopefully it will not take me too long to edit the book. I can see that in the nearly three years since my last rounds of edits I have strengthened in my sentence crafting skills.

Let’s hope I have progressed far enough.